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Tuesday 2 August 2011

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Once upon a time there was a secreat agent his name was James bond he was amazing at going on missions and killing people when they do something bad. He had to go on a cold mission and there was a huge monster James bond got out a AK47 and started shooting the huge monster. then after 500 shots the huge monster died then James bond took it back to his boss to show big it was his boss was amazed how big it was. then one sunny morning James bonds boss said you have earnd your new gun it was a shot gun.

2 comments:

  1. You have used a good amount of adjectives in your writing but next time try to use a variety of them.

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  2. Nice adjectives and story Brandin!:)

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