W.A.L.T Attempt Paragraphs 28/5/12
P-> On Saturday I played a game of rugby we faced Marist It was hard because they had big players in there team they had Keylan and Anthony. I got elbowed on my head it heart I felt dizzy.
P-> After the first half we played the second half we were winning I played as full back and flanker Keylan got knocked out for 5seconds then he got up and went on the sideline then we got a try we won 31/0.
Each paragraph is meant to be about one main idea. You might need to plan your stories first to help you. Mrs Larsen
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